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Kool-Aid and calculated risk taking, A brisk walk on the mild side Has left you wanting more. The line is breaking, But be careful what you fish for. There’s a knock on the door And it’s for you, Yeah, so it’s for you. I remember stepping into the brine As you tip tapped the tick tock To keep it in line. It was running out of rhyme and time Was set to trickling And tickling from inside. Doris day and Doris night! The stars about won’t start a fight If you talk to them like that, My dear. Celestial bodies are not fans Of blood, And blood breeds bad seeds That shoot at the moon Like thieves. The gull are shook, Rattling frigid looks, And the crooks are creeping Up the hall. Oh, Doris, I can see them all, And they call like crows In a catered carrion free for all. As the sun fades Into its aquatic grave, I save a test from the ******* past And, Doris, You have loaned stones to my House of glass. You’ve crashed, And you’ve bashed, And you’ve lashed yourself To a mast That you aren’t willing to steer. In this instance, I can still hear the bruising pier, Cheering and jeering, Until it believed its last.
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May 7, 2021
May 7, 2021 at 1:26 AM UTC
Doris I
Kool-Aid and calculated risk taking, A brisk walk on the mild side Has left you wanting more. The line is breaking, But be careful what you fish for. There’s a knock on the door And it’s for you, Yeah, so it’s for you. I remember stepping into the brine As you tip tapped the tick tock To keep it in line. It was running out of rhyme and time Was set to trickling And tickling from inside. Doris day and Doris night! The stars about won’t start a fight If you talk to them like that, My dear. Celestial bodies are not fans Of blood, And blood breeds bad seeds That shoot at the moon Like thieves. The gull are shook, Rattling frigid looks, And the crooks are creeping Up the hall. Oh, Doris, I can see them all, And they call like crows In a catered carrion free for all. As the sun fades Into its aquatic grave, I save a test from the ******* past And, Doris, You have loaned stones to my House of glass. You’ve crashed, And you’ve bashed, And you’ve lashed yourself To a mast That you aren’t willing to steer. In this instance, I can still hear the bruising pier, Cheering and jeering, Until it believed its last.
This is part one in a ten part narrative poem. The whole thing tells the story of some unidentified incident, a nasty time in an unknown person's life. Doris may be many things. Doris may be nothing.
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May 7, 2021
May 7, 2021 at 1:26 AM UTC
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