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****** mind stranger-friends Not sure what to say to them Don’t **** up Mind your manners First time hurts, but it gets better Friends are warm love, then peace say thanks and move on quietly My edge had finally been bent Still innocent but not insane She thought it was spice I thought it was a card game
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Aug 4, 2013
Aug 4, 2013 at 1:15 AM UTC
"I thought it was spice, Henry thought it was a card game"
****** mind stranger-friends Not sure what to say to them Don’t **** up Mind your manners First time hurts, but it gets better Friends are warm love, then peace say thanks and move on quietly My edge had finally been bent Still innocent but not insane She thought it was spice I thought it was a card game
okay i sorta built this around the title, and i don't think i like it all that much. I just like the meter of the last two lines. It sounds like the end to something, but not this poem
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Aug 4, 2013
Aug 4, 2013 at 1:15 AM UTC
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