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What tempted me to join the queue? It must be some great treat.   Only delight could keep these souls Shuffling on blistered feet.   I turned a corner hours ago, Quite perpendicular, But as I count the corners off I’ve tallied five so far.   The walls are clean, but they’re not bright, Scrubbed to sobriety. I passed a blotch I’d seen before, But it might lie to me.   This line may loop into a square, And no one’s first or last, And all who’ve shuffled patiently Are doomed to lose the past. Did I ascend to this closed floor By staircase or by lift?   Outside must lie some wider world, Denied a precious gift.     The walls are bare of openings, But we need only one.   Quiet can’t be the sole reward For everything we’ve done.
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Apr 23, 2021
Apr 23, 2021 at 1:09 PM UTC
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What tempted me to join the queue? It must be some great treat.   Only delight could keep these souls Shuffling on blistered feet.   I turned a corner hours ago, Quite perpendicular, But as I count the corners off I’ve tallied five so far.   The walls are clean, but they’re not bright, Scrubbed to sobriety. I passed a blotch I’d seen before, But it might lie to me.   This line may loop into a square, And no one’s first or last, And all who’ve shuffled patiently Are doomed to lose the past. Did I ascend to this closed floor By staircase or by lift?   Outside must lie some wider world, Denied a precious gift.     The walls are bare of openings, But we need only one.   Quiet can’t be the sole reward For everything we’ve done.
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Apr 23, 2021
Apr 23, 2021 at 1:09 PM UTC
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