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"I painted a picture today" I'm hoping it inspires people in a similar way that my poetry does No ! I hope it does more than that I've scrutinised and criticised it from all angles Til my energy drained It's of a sunset The colours are vivid n just right "or are they"? My local gallery's displaying it at a fair price or is it? I'm not sure if it's hanging in the best place? Does that matter? It's taken a long time to complete I'm surprised they thought it was good enough ? I am my harshest critic A perfectionist ......
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Jul 31, 2013
Jul 31, 2013 at 10:06 PM UTC
Perfectionist
"I painted a picture today" I'm hoping it inspires people in a similar way that my poetry does No ! I hope it does more than that I've scrutinised and criticised it from all angles Til my energy drained It's of a sunset The colours are vivid n just right "or are they"? My local gallery's displaying it at a fair price or is it? I'm not sure if it's hanging in the best place? Does that matter? It's taken a long time to complete I'm surprised they thought it was good enough ? I am my harshest critic A perfectionist ......
Not sure if being like this is a blessing or curse But it's who I am can be tough at times
lorraine-day
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Jul 31, 2013
Jul 31, 2013 at 10:06 PM UTC
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