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Growing up alone A world of torture Speculating and waste Drowning in gluttony Wearing the condemnation of men Appropriating the virtues of girls Feasting in the winds of noise Dealing the white powders Trialling the ceilings lights Filling containers for strife Sweet seclusion with a toilet for company Crawling through the gutters on all fours Black and white keys connected Caressing platitudes on fire Busting a gut on the walkway Peaceful vigilance a fraternity Standing on two feet Tanked, yanked and naked Where is that space in time Deserted, drowning in civilisation Rebuked Rebellion Revelations Reciting poetry
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Apr 3, 2021
Apr 3, 2021 at 8:08 PM UTC
Standing on two feet, no excuses.
Growing up alone A world of torture Speculating and waste Drowning in gluttony Wearing the condemnation of men Appropriating the virtues of girls Feasting in the winds of noise Dealing the white powders Trialling the ceilings lights Filling containers for strife Sweet seclusion with a toilet for company Crawling through the gutters on all fours Black and white keys connected Caressing platitudes on fire Busting a gut on the walkway Peaceful vigilance a fraternity Standing on two feet Tanked, yanked and naked Where is that space in time Deserted, drowning in civilisation Rebuked Rebellion Revelations Reciting poetry
I had this title in my head for days. After watching a video this evening on Freddie Mercury and his poetic songs, in the early hours, when very tired I just let go with the words as they appeared in my head and let them write the poem. I may change it when I review it in a few days. Let me know what you think it means.
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Apr 3, 2021
Apr 3, 2021 at 8:08 PM UTC
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