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So maybe I can't make you love me And I can't stop the stars from falling into space But I can take the curve of your torso Wrapped around mine And twist it into my blood As the hallelujah I need to give myself Even if your breathing is a lie Even if you break me with deft words So I can't make you love me So I can't But I'll try But I'll try
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Jul 31, 2013
Jul 31, 2013 at 12:55 AM UTC
To the one I broke.
So maybe I can't make you love me And I can't stop the stars from falling into space But I can take the curve of your torso Wrapped around mine And twist it into my blood As the hallelujah I need to give myself Even if your breathing is a lie Even if you break me with deft words So I can't make you love me So I can't But I'll try But I'll try
I'm so sad. I'm so sorry. Inspired by Bonnie Raitt's I Can't Make You Love Me
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Jul 31, 2013
Jul 31, 2013 at 12:55 AM UTC
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