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The beautiful scar deep in green, peaceful question mark loops through the field in which I stand on ground soft as a soap-drunk sponge. The sun, a lit matchstick-tip burns all shades of tangerine and saffron. The water I hear trickle by, the water I see flossing the weeds, a turquoise flow of blood from this vein to the beating heart.
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Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 12:45 PM UTC
Vein
The beautiful scar deep in green, peaceful question mark loops through the field in which I stand on ground soft as a soap-drunk sponge. The sun, a lit matchstick-tip burns all shades of tangerine and saffron. The water I hear trickle by, the water I see flossing the weeds, a turquoise flow of blood from this vein to the beating heart.
Written: July 2013. Explanation: A poem written in my own time after taking a look at some early Ted Hughes work - a possible contender for my third year university dissertation.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 12:45 PM UTC
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