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there was a castle built constructed of bricks, laid by hand piled one on another it grew without respite each brick laid by hand -- cautiously -- delicately and with each brick the castle grew grew to match the trees to exceed them to tower over us and the world the castle becomes a stronghold -- impenetrable -- unshaken -- inescapable there was a castle built -- in my grief -- in your absence   i lay trapped outside its walls i lay in the green in my meager flat confined and dwelling outside the castle walls standing, i gaze not even the sun stands tall as to surpass the grey my gaze drops to my feet jade and amber peaking through my toes a world surrounds me i shift, i walk to the left the castle in the brim of sight though yearning, i abstain from its full view instead i stride on and it goes and i am f r e e the greens in every direction but behind me
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Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 1:26 AM UTC
there was a castle built
there was a castle built constructed of bricks, laid by hand piled one on another it grew without respite each brick laid by hand -- cautiously -- delicately and with each brick the castle grew grew to match the trees to exceed them to tower over us and the world the castle becomes a stronghold -- impenetrable -- unshaken -- inescapable there was a castle built -- in my grief -- in your absence   i lay trapped outside its walls i lay in the green in my meager flat confined and dwelling outside the castle walls standing, i gaze not even the sun stands tall as to surpass the grey my gaze drops to my feet jade and amber peaking through my toes a world surrounds me i shift, i walk to the left the castle in the brim of sight though yearning, i abstain from its full view instead i stride on and it goes and i am f r e e the greens in every direction but behind me
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Jul 29, 2013
Jul 29, 2013 at 1:26 AM UTC
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