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Oh , I feel I miss you But is it you whom I miss? Or is it those talkative eyes Or those unrealised lies Are they even these Or is it our lives ; That I miss? Or your touch unfelt; yet as cold as ice? Or the endless unperceived sighs; Or just those eyes' lights What is it that  I miss But it's perhaps surely not you. Because this doesn't give me a fright. It's not you . It's not you, I don't want it be you .
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Mar 14, 2021
Mar 14, 2021 at 11:29 AM UTC
Lost Saudade
Oh , I feel I miss you But is it you whom I miss? Or is it those talkative eyes Or those unrealised lies Are they even these Or is it our lives ; That I miss? Or your touch unfelt; yet as cold as ice? Or the endless unperceived sighs; Or just those eyes' lights What is it that  I miss But it's perhaps surely not you. Because this doesn't give me a fright. It's not you . It's not you, I don't want it be you .
Sometimes it's not that we miss someone but probably the way they made us feel, their presence and influence .Hope the irony I tried to add is felt.
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Mar 14, 2021
Mar 14, 2021 at 11:29 AM UTC
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