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Man enters the tavern                             Claps down some cash and outbursts ;                                                        'Thirsty Things Firstly !' The barman evaluates his condition       And provides a session brew Man tilts toward potential company (a ferrety bloke in the shadows) "Pull up that stack of milk crates                          And halve a heart with me" (he earns a quick friend                                                in a tolerant stranger) Soon fellow gaspers fill out the gloom And an eve of humour descends Though soon upending Gourds downed the gullet Sunk ugly into the scene The tippling wit drags the night               to the Slurry Pit things turn Psychologically Rugged his Mates soon round on him bulldozing at the Elbows saying he's a Cheapskate they Berate him with rigorous Rattleprat he's been goated with the Cain's mark they tousle his crown malicious Thorough in his cups and eaves he mumbles and leaves heaving up bile words unheard               gurgle over his shoulder outside is dark and harsh Outside the whole wild world does wail and weary drunkenly he sings to match its melancholy but sadness lifts with his altered view he sees 'a flock of moons' weigh down the sky and natures churn                                                          makes a phosphorescent stew of it all ... decay                                          to lifes' celebration
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Jun 27, 2022
Jun 27, 2022 at 9:04 PM UTC
a Flock of Moons (decay to life II)
Man enters the tavern                             Claps down some cash and outbursts ;                                                        'Thirsty Things Firstly !' The barman evaluates his condition       And provides a session brew Man tilts toward potential company (a ferrety bloke in the shadows) "Pull up that stack of milk crates                          And halve a heart with me" (he earns a quick friend                                                in a tolerant stranger) Soon fellow gaspers fill out the gloom And an eve of humour descends Though soon upending Gourds downed the gullet Sunk ugly into the scene The tippling wit drags the night               to the Slurry Pit things turn Psychologically Rugged his Mates soon round on him bulldozing at the Elbows saying he's a Cheapskate they Berate him with rigorous Rattleprat he's been goated with the Cain's mark they tousle his crown malicious Thorough in his cups and eaves he mumbles and leaves heaving up bile words unheard               gurgle over his shoulder outside is dark and harsh Outside the whole wild world does wail and weary drunkenly he sings to match its melancholy but sadness lifts with his altered view he sees 'a flock of moons' weigh down the sky and natures churn                                                          makes a phosphorescent stew of it all ... decay                                          to lifes' celebration
'to see a flock of moons' is an old saying meaning drunk USES PARTS FROM PREVIOUS POEMS decay to life (first part) the scentless winter over snow melts             evacuates into the ground                                            under Spings attention Springs arrival elevates mood alleviates the heart halved by Winter our strained eyes are relieved                                   with the dismissal of reflective snows 'thirsty things firstly' ; from the groundswell and sponge the air is steeped with earth ; decay to life
neth-jones
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Jun 27, 2022
Jun 27, 2022 at 9:04 PM UTC
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