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I'm in my weird melancholic mood. Do you know this mood? When you can sense the whisper of the breeze, That would let you freeze And hear every tiny noise. You're a bit dizzy, a bit dazzled, And very bewildered. This mood of scintillating tears.
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Jul 27, 2013
Jul 27, 2013 at 8:28 AM UTC
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I'm in my weird melancholic mood. Do you know this mood? When you can sense the whisper of the breeze, That would let you freeze And hear every tiny noise. You're a bit dizzy, a bit dazzled, And very bewildered. This mood of scintillating tears.
I was chatting with a friend, telling her how I feel. Then, she added the italicized sentence to my words and told me I can call it a poem. I'll take her word for that :)
lumiere
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Lebanese
Jul 27, 2013
Jul 27, 2013 at 8:28 AM UTC
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