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The air was painted. Inside the chain link fences were clouds; brushstrokes that could’ve been proffered by Van Gogh or ******* as they dissipated into the early, cold morning air, pausing only for a few moments to allow some of the particulates to freeze; the hydrogen, the oxygen, the lye, & detergents that make up whatever is used in a prison laundry. The effluvium is rich, the odor of a passable cleanliness in what is largely a rather fetid domain. The scent of bleach, harsh, chlorinated, removal of that which stains. Yet, something stays, an acrid, sour smell; an unpleasantness which seems to have chosen to remain unwashed. It is concluded, that this emanation, is the opposite of emancipation, it is a olfactive reminder that Building # 7 serves up freshly washed sorrows, rages, or regrets as well as whiter whites, releasing stains from grays more often than the wearers of these wardrobes are released themselves. With this in mind, swirling, shifting, moving, motivating marching upward, toward Building # 1, It is breathed in, and out, and in again, renewal, like clean laundry washed in industrial soaps, rinsed in disinfectants, delousers, deodorants unknowable. Starting over. Today. Tomorrow. Overmorrow, And, Everafter. Amen. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications 2021
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Feb 28, 2021
Feb 28, 2021 at 9:52 PM UTC
Building # 7
The air was painted. Inside the chain link fences were clouds; brushstrokes that could’ve been proffered by Van Gogh or ******* as they dissipated into the early, cold morning air, pausing only for a few moments to allow some of the particulates to freeze; the hydrogen, the oxygen, the lye, & detergents that make up whatever is used in a prison laundry. The effluvium is rich, the odor of a passable cleanliness in what is largely a rather fetid domain. The scent of bleach, harsh, chlorinated, removal of that which stains. Yet, something stays, an acrid, sour smell; an unpleasantness which seems to have chosen to remain unwashed. It is concluded, that this emanation, is the opposite of emancipation, it is a olfactive reminder that Building # 7 serves up freshly washed sorrows, rages, or regrets as well as whiter whites, releasing stains from grays more often than the wearers of these wardrobes are released themselves. With this in mind, swirling, shifting, moving, motivating marching upward, toward Building # 1, It is breathed in, and out, and in again, renewal, like clean laundry washed in industrial soaps, rinsed in disinfectants, delousers, deodorants unknowable. Starting over. Today. Tomorrow. Overmorrow, And, Everafter. Amen. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications 2021
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Feb 28, 2021
Feb 28, 2021 at 9:52 PM UTC
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