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CECI N'EST PAS UN... poème! It's always the same the adverbs blame the adjectives the adjectives the nouns and the nouns the verbs for the imminent collapse of this poem The images declaim we're not to blame. The rhyme just buggers off. The figurative language can't be bothered to get up of their ar.. A senile simile smiles wistfully in a to be or not to be voice. The metaphors have gone on strike. Oh for Gawd's sake doesn't anybody know wot de !%&* they're !%&* doing I ask using the demotic. There is a sudden silence... all that is to be heard outside a weeping willow weeps for me. How pathetic can one poem get? No...don't answer that it was a rhetorical question! The words all look to me to pass sentence. . . I tell them that's it ( there is a collective moan ) I'm calling this poem - off!
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Feb 24, 2021
Feb 24, 2021 at 7:49 AM UTC
CECI N'EST PAS UN... poème!
CECI N'EST PAS UN... poème! It's always the same the adverbs blame the adjectives the adjectives the nouns and the nouns the verbs for the imminent collapse of this poem The images declaim we're not to blame. The rhyme just buggers off. The figurative language can't be bothered to get up of their ar.. A senile simile smiles wistfully in a to be or not to be voice. The metaphors have gone on strike. Oh for Gawd's sake doesn't anybody know wot de !%&* they're !%&* doing I ask using the demotic. There is a sudden silence... all that is to be heard outside a weeping willow weeps for me. How pathetic can one poem get? No...don't answer that it was a rhetorical question! The words all look to me to pass sentence. . . I tell them that's it ( there is a collective moan ) I'm calling this poem - off!
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Feb 24, 2021
Feb 24, 2021 at 7:49 AM UTC
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