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it's a calm summer night the clouds parted like a main drape the scene set here I am waiting I've wanted it all to turn out fine but the stars never seem to be falling for me maybe it's because everything else seems to be falling around me here I am, screaming, kicking, throwing stones upwards hoping they will shine when falling back down but the show takes place on this side of the drape tonight
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Feb 15, 2021
Feb 15, 2021 at 4:54 PM UTC
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it's a calm summer night the clouds parted like a main drape the scene set here I am waiting I've wanted it all to turn out fine but the stars never seem to be falling for me maybe it's because everything else seems to be falling around me here I am, screaming, kicking, throwing stones upwards hoping they will shine when falling back down but the show takes place on this side of the drape tonight
Hey there, I long for some constructive criticism.
Yasamen
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28/GQ/Poland
Feb 15, 2021
Feb 15, 2021 at 4:54 PM UTC
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