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on that night your eyes were drunk as heavily as you were. we sat down star gazing, and your sweaty, yet cold hand pointing the sky counting one, two, three... and i could tell your drunken eyes held more of them those tiny little stars, and as soon as that cold wind of August touched your skin, you collapsed on me shivering, wanting to be sheltered and happily i let you in in my tiny little cabin. but what a misery as the night dawned you were now sober and and the stars were gone the little shelter, you left it, wrecked abandoned.                       _  vargov_
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Feb 5, 2021
Feb 5, 2021 at 2:15 PM UTC
12:43 AM
on that night your eyes were drunk as heavily as you were. we sat down star gazing, and your sweaty, yet cold hand pointing the sky counting one, two, three... and i could tell your drunken eyes held more of them those tiny little stars, and as soon as that cold wind of August touched your skin, you collapsed on me shivering, wanting to be sheltered and happily i let you in in my tiny little cabin. but what a misery as the night dawned you were now sober and and the stars were gone the little shelter, you left it, wrecked abandoned.                       _  vargov_
I'm awake. Overthinking :) what about you
thecrookedwriter
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21/M/India.
Feb 5, 2021
Feb 5, 2021 at 2:15 PM UTC
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