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Awake! Awake! Please awake! The only words she knew as the breath leaves my being As she sobs, I gained strength When she stops, my life drifts away. She's connected with me. Live! Live! Please live! Without you I am nothing, I was touched So deep within my wounds, I felt love sinking through I was so infatuated. Even love can heal and I got to experience that. Breathe! Breathe! Please breathe! I need you here with me for I am nothing without thee She vented with her tears, she screamed in anger I was the hope for her living, the reason at that She was in love with me. Don't go! Don't go! Please don't go! I was at the edge of life, It was my time to leave scorched earth. She wept and in her arms is where I died. She killed herself and I think that was love.
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Feb 3, 2021
Feb 3, 2021 at 6:15 PM UTC
Spear-headed
Awake! Awake! Please awake! The only words she knew as the breath leaves my being As she sobs, I gained strength When she stops, my life drifts away. She's connected with me. Live! Live! Please live! Without you I am nothing, I was touched So deep within my wounds, I felt love sinking through I was so infatuated. Even love can heal and I got to experience that. Breathe! Breathe! Please breathe! I need you here with me for I am nothing without thee She vented with her tears, she screamed in anger I was the hope for her living, the reason at that She was in love with me. Don't go! Don't go! Please don't go! I was at the edge of life, It was my time to leave scorched earth. She wept and in her arms is where I died. She killed herself and I think that was love.
Inspired by past relationships and the relationships that some of my closest friends have been in.
jorge_gdl_master
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22/M/Jamaica
Feb 3, 2021
Feb 3, 2021 at 6:15 PM UTC
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