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Listen: believe me, If I knew how to rise up And overcome them You would see the shadows crawl Out of discomfort For the light bursting, flying, Exploding forth and Breaking free of the old bonds On my now unfettered soul.
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Jan 20, 2021
Jan 20, 2021 at 3:53 PM UTC
Breaking, pt 2
Listen: believe me, If I knew how to rise up And overcome them You would see the shadows crawl Out of discomfort For the light bursting, flying, Exploding forth and Breaking free of the old bonds On my now unfettered soul.
A choka version of the 6-syllabic poem I wrote in May 2014. "Breaking" Believe me, if I could You'd see the shadows crawl Out of discomfort for The light bursting, flying, Breaking free of the bonds On my unfettered soul. #sixlines #sixsyllables
ashley-somebody
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29/F/Indonesian
Jan 20, 2021
Jan 20, 2021 at 3:53 PM UTC
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