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Absence is to love as wind is to fire; it extinguishes the small and kindles the great — Roger de Bussy-Rabutin, Memoir of Roger de Rabutin Four thousand meters above the sea, I breathe without air I feel the same when beside me you are no more The black, the void chokes me in the moment’s despair And The Scarlet Fear runs inside me with a thunderous roar My aching marooned heart bleeds from behind Of the darkened soul that consumes me at each stride But love is the golden aether of my troubled mind An oxygen supply brought to this confusion tide Without your presence, they were icy nights Though knowing your fire ignited with my fuel Is a mild treat, a promise of a beautiful sight Kindless trouble, is it all in my imagination? And is the love I feel a mere foolish incantation? I will never know until she answers my soundless voice
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Jan 13, 2021
Jan 13, 2021 at 3:10 PM UTC
Void, Aether, A Promise
Absence is to love as wind is to fire; it extinguishes the small and kindles the great — Roger de Bussy-Rabutin, Memoir of Roger de Rabutin Four thousand meters above the sea, I breathe without air I feel the same when beside me you are no more The black, the void chokes me in the moment’s despair And The Scarlet Fear runs inside me with a thunderous roar My aching marooned heart bleeds from behind Of the darkened soul that consumes me at each stride But love is the golden aether of my troubled mind An oxygen supply brought to this confusion tide Without your presence, they were icy nights Though knowing your fire ignited with my fuel Is a mild treat, a promise of a beautiful sight Kindless trouble, is it all in my imagination? And is the love I feel a mere foolish incantation? I will never know until she answers my soundless voice
This poem follows a modification of a sonnet structure and follows the story of the previous poem, showing a layer of dissonant emotions engulfing the speaker.
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Jan 13, 2021
Jan 13, 2021 at 3:10 PM UTC
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