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He had that groaning soul loneliness, like a puffy white cloud, floating aimless, and aching toward the black abyss--that gray sky sadness; like he was five years old and just watched his dog get hit by a car. You could smell the pain--taste it, like potato chips on a sore throat. It smelled like a basement or cobwebs. I told him, "Nothing will heal that crap, just time and dirt." He didn't blink, and his soft walnut eyes flashed crossword confusion.
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Jan 11, 2021
Jan 11, 2021 at 3:22 PM UTC
Time and Dirt
He had that groaning soul loneliness, like a puffy white cloud, floating aimless, and aching toward the black abyss--that gray sky sadness; like he was five years old and just watched his dog get hit by a car. You could smell the pain--taste it, like potato chips on a sore throat. It smelled like a basement or cobwebs. I told him, "Nothing will heal that crap, just time and dirt." He didn't blink, and his soft walnut eyes flashed crossword confusion.
thomas-w-case
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59/M/Clear Lake
Jan 11, 2021
Jan 11, 2021 at 3:22 PM UTC
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