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This is a story All about How important it is To let feelings out It’s dangerous to hold them in But where to start? Where to begin? There once was a girl Who loved to write All of the day And all of the night She’d pen observations Her feelings and fears Poetry, stories Paper up to her ears These thoughts weren’t for others Just for herself Her private emotions For her own bookshelf One day an invader Snuck in to read Her private thoughts What a ***** deed?! When the girl discovered Her privacy breached She vowed never again To put herself on a sheet She’d hold things inside Keep them in her own brain Where no one could read them See her joy or her pain She promised herself She’d take time to reflect Not writing stuff down Wouldn’t have an effect... But slowly she found She had less and less time To acknowledge her thoughts To stop, think and refine Her ideas became jumbled Squished inside of her head With no way to release them She was confused instead Life became busy And years passed real quick Sadness overcame her And she became sick Then a teacher encouraged Her to write feelings down Remembering she once did Brought on a frown But she built up the courage And decided to try Her teacher promised No one would pry Slowly she began To write things again And feeling flowed From the end of her pen Her mood was lifted A sentence at a time It felt tremendous Wonderful, sublime! She promised herself Right there and then Never would she stop Using paper and pen To let out her feelings It was her release The way to maintain Her inner peace So, the moral is For your own health Whatever YOUR outlet Express yourself! By Amber Heaney 2021 ©
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Jan 9, 2021
Jan 9, 2021 at 3:14 AM UTC
As yet Untitled - I imagine this as a children’s picture book
This is a story All about How important it is To let feelings out It’s dangerous to hold them in But where to start? Where to begin? There once was a girl Who loved to write All of the day And all of the night She’d pen observations Her feelings and fears Poetry, stories Paper up to her ears These thoughts weren’t for others Just for herself Her private emotions For her own bookshelf One day an invader Snuck in to read Her private thoughts What a ***** deed?! When the girl discovered Her privacy breached She vowed never again To put herself on a sheet She’d hold things inside Keep them in her own brain Where no one could read them See her joy or her pain She promised herself She’d take time to reflect Not writing stuff down Wouldn’t have an effect... But slowly she found She had less and less time To acknowledge her thoughts To stop, think and refine Her ideas became jumbled Squished inside of her head With no way to release them She was confused instead Life became busy And years passed real quick Sadness overcame her And she became sick Then a teacher encouraged Her to write feelings down Remembering she once did Brought on a frown But she built up the courage And decided to try Her teacher promised No one would pry Slowly she began To write things again And feeling flowed From the end of her pen Her mood was lifted A sentence at a time It felt tremendous Wonderful, sublime! She promised herself Right there and then Never would she stop Using paper and pen To let out her feelings It was her release The way to maintain Her inner peace So, the moral is For your own health Whatever YOUR outlet Express yourself! By Amber Heaney 2021 ©
Party inspired by my recent return to writing verse. Partly inspired by my children and students. I would very much like to hear feedback, I imagine this as a children’s (8-12yos) picture book.
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Jan 9, 2021
Jan 9, 2021 at 3:14 AM UTC
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