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This frustration is overtaking my ability to function properly, I'm not depressed, but I do detest that this situation has unbalanced my harmony. I lost a part of me, or did I let her go? Was it me that could not see? It was I who closed his eyes and this I know. I know that in that desperate act I was with good intentions. I know that i mentioned many times how i planned to present it. Did I plan too much? Did I put too much effort in the attempt to correct myself? "Don't fix what isn't broken." That's how she expressed herself. It was I that was broken not she who pleads with silent screams. Was it selfish to leave simply to see if i could be the man of my dreams? I dreamed of a King who would care for his Queen. Shield her from pain. Dry her from rain, and kiss her so sweet. I can no longer continue with this poem cause sugar is bitter. Call me a quitter. -J.Cruz Hernandez
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 12:03 PM UTC
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This frustration is overtaking my ability to function properly, I'm not depressed, but I do detest that this situation has unbalanced my harmony. I lost a part of me, or did I let her go? Was it me that could not see? It was I who closed his eyes and this I know. I know that in that desperate act I was with good intentions. I know that i mentioned many times how i planned to present it. Did I plan too much? Did I put too much effort in the attempt to correct myself? "Don't fix what isn't broken." That's how she expressed herself. It was I that was broken not she who pleads with silent screams. Was it selfish to leave simply to see if i could be the man of my dreams? I dreamed of a King who would care for his Queen. Shield her from pain. Dry her from rain, and kiss her so sweet. I can no longer continue with this poem cause sugar is bitter. Call me a quitter. -J.Cruz Hernandez
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 12:03 PM UTC
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