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Today I walked into my room, clean it is, for the first time in months, and I couldn't help notice how the naked floors, stripped of dishevel, made my room feel vacant. With the bed made, the fluffed pillows no longer felt like a place to rest my stricken face. The carpet, cleaned and vacuumed, seemed only fitting if a loved one were to enter after I was long gone, and once this thought raced through my mind, I no longer felt accomplished by my simple arranges. It's strange to be inside a room that is built austerely for me when I have convinced myself I am no longer alive... a room that I made mine with walls of purple, its homemade curtains, its hand-painted doorknobs, bookshelves, and dressers. ...that brief mourning, I may have found, is what it's like to enter a room that was once someone's dreams and not have them there.
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Jul 12, 2013
Jul 12, 2013 at 5:14 PM UTC
As if I were dead
Today I walked into my room, clean it is, for the first time in months, and I couldn't help notice how the naked floors, stripped of dishevel, made my room feel vacant. With the bed made, the fluffed pillows no longer felt like a place to rest my stricken face. The carpet, cleaned and vacuumed, seemed only fitting if a loved one were to enter after I was long gone, and once this thought raced through my mind, I no longer felt accomplished by my simple arranges. It's strange to be inside a room that is built austerely for me when I have convinced myself I am no longer alive... a room that I made mine with walls of purple, its homemade curtains, its hand-painted doorknobs, bookshelves, and dressers. ...that brief mourning, I may have found, is what it's like to enter a room that was once someone's dreams and not have them there.
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Jul 12, 2013
Jul 12, 2013 at 5:14 PM UTC
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