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I haven't written since you left, This is my fifth attempt to write something poetic. Unfortunately, you stole my metaphors from the tip of my tongue Left my onomatopoeias stinging on my lips I must have left my similes in your hair and on your neck where my lips touched This is my fifth try but it's still not poetic. -(j.a)
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Jul 11, 2013
Jul 11, 2013 at 2:53 AM UTC
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I haven't written since you left, This is my fifth attempt to write something poetic. Unfortunately, you stole my metaphors from the tip of my tongue Left my onomatopoeias stinging on my lips I must have left my similes in your hair and on your neck where my lips touched This is my fifth try but it's still not poetic. -(j.a)
caroline-13
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Jul 11, 2013
Jul 11, 2013 at 2:53 AM UTC
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