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*If this isn't good, I don't know what is.* I thought to myself. It was a habit I picked up from reading too many books; to acknowledge the good occurrences when they occurred. It seems they happen more often when you pay attention. However, don't imagine that the scene was perfect. We woke up on a hardwood floor, hungover and sleep-deprived. My jacket was the pillow, and, luckily, someone had draped a blanket over us. A cat wandered under the blanket, and sat down on my naked shins, which shook us from our slumber. She laughed as his tail swooshed slowly across her leg and pulled my arm around her. "I never expected to wake up next to you." She said, in a whimsical way We shooed the cat out (he was quite stubborn) and laughed together at the absurdity of it all. Later, we kissed farewell and promised to meet again. Now, I sit in contemplation; recalling all I can about the night. Moments are just that -- moments. Parsed smaller and smaller the further you look. I don't need to remember each minutiae -- how many seconds elapsed between each breath -- only how I felt at her side. I think this is what I'm aiming to do: to hold each reminiscence sacred.
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Jul 9, 2013
Jul 9, 2013 at 6:57 PM UTC
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*If this isn't good, I don't know what is.* I thought to myself. It was a habit I picked up from reading too many books; to acknowledge the good occurrences when they occurred. It seems they happen more often when you pay attention. However, don't imagine that the scene was perfect. We woke up on a hardwood floor, hungover and sleep-deprived. My jacket was the pillow, and, luckily, someone had draped a blanket over us. A cat wandered under the blanket, and sat down on my naked shins, which shook us from our slumber. She laughed as his tail swooshed slowly across her leg and pulled my arm around her. "I never expected to wake up next to you." She said, in a whimsical way We shooed the cat out (he was quite stubborn) and laughed together at the absurdity of it all. Later, we kissed farewell and promised to meet again. Now, I sit in contemplation; recalling all I can about the night. Moments are just that -- moments. Parsed smaller and smaller the further you look. I don't need to remember each minutiae -- how many seconds elapsed between each breath -- only how I felt at her side. I think this is what I'm aiming to do: to hold each reminiscence sacred.
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Jul 9, 2013
Jul 9, 2013 at 6:57 PM UTC
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