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III. clay feet the metal nightingales chirp their heralding serenatas realizing every lucid daydream and smelting away every plastic contingency to part the molten gold in Your eyes is to tempt Fate but you are Achilles and i am your patroclus i will lay down my pride, my life, every ounce of my being for You You shall sit atop pedestals adorned with bas relief acanthus conquest and compassion life and death ashes to ashes, dust to dust i will exalt You and Your pride and wash Your clay feet You are my first musing in the morning and final contemplation at night twice and three years of abstinence make my body whole and clean
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Jan 25, 2021
Jan 25, 2021 at 11:55 PM UTC
iliad, a poem | no. 3
III. clay feet the metal nightingales chirp their heralding serenatas realizing every lucid daydream and smelting away every plastic contingency to part the molten gold in Your eyes is to tempt Fate but you are Achilles and i am your patroclus i will lay down my pride, my life, every ounce of my being for You You shall sit atop pedestals adorned with bas relief acanthus conquest and compassion life and death ashes to ashes, dust to dust i will exalt You and Your pride and wash Your clay feet You are my first musing in the morning and final contemplation at night twice and three years of abstinence make my body whole and clean
to the heroes, of antiquity and of today: we know only mortality and glory, and i fear for his naivete. ~ILIAD~ this series, inspired by the greek epic of the same name attributed to homer and madeline miller's "song of achilles", is a narrative of my life, short as it may be. i [attempt] to explore everything from race to sexuality, to friendships and reconciliation. i hope you take something from this. you can read in whichever order you like, as a series or as standalones.
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20/M/in our idle town
Jan 25, 2021
Jan 25, 2021 at 11:55 PM UTC
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