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Obedience The word makes my mouth feel weird. What is it there for. It is it really there to help with discipline. Or is it there to make you a tool for society. Is to maintain you from being yourself. Or does it suppose to balance it out. I don't know at this point. While I was a kid, obedience made me a toy to society. and held me back from myself. I grew up resenting everyone who could be themselves wishing I was free. But finally I have that freedom I crave. Obedience. What is it for?
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Oct 30, 2020
Oct 30, 2020 at 12:00 PM UTC
Obedience
Obedience The word makes my mouth feel weird. What is it there for. It is it really there to help with discipline. Or is it there to make you a tool for society. Is to maintain you from being yourself. Or does it suppose to balance it out. I don't know at this point. While I was a kid, obedience made me a toy to society. and held me back from myself. I grew up resenting everyone who could be themselves wishing I was free. But finally I have that freedom I crave. Obedience. What is it for?
I created this poem from thinking the word obedience and this is exactly how I feel about it
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20/F/United States
Oct 30, 2020
Oct 30, 2020 at 12:00 PM UTC
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