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There was so much more      that we could have said and done,           but we said goodbye.
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Oct 21, 2020
Oct 21, 2020 at 11:10 AM UTC
parting
There was so much more      that we could have said and done,           but we said goodbye.
This is not a haiku, though it does have 5, 7, 5 syllables, because it doesn't relate to nature or any season. It has the same syllables, but is more correctly a senryu, related to human nature.
paul-hansford
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Oct 21, 2020
Oct 21, 2020 at 11:10 AM UTC
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