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Dalya met Baruch in Oslo, a small cafe in a back street; he was eating a cream cake and coffee. She was fuming over the Yank ***** that she shared a tent with back at base camp. It’s like sharing with a scented skunk, she said. Baruch listened, the fiery girl sat opposite him, stirred her latte, spat out words. Baruch was halfway through the Gulag book, the Solzhenitsyn eye opener on the labour camps of Russia. Dalya’s gripe seemed pretty shallow; her language left little to the imagination, rough words, hard chipped, chiselled out of rock sort of thing, he thought, watching her mouth move the words. Always about the men she’s had, Dalya said, as if I cared a monkey’s. Baruch forked in more cake, fingered off cream from his upper lip and licked. They’d picked up the American in Hamburg, squeezed her into the overland truck with the others. And oh, yes, where she's been, Dalya said, she’s been under the Pope’s armpit, no doubt.  She sipped the latte, stared at Baruch, her eyes dark blue, her lips thin, her hair dark and curled. Maybe she has, Baruch said, but what’s it to you? I have to hear her jabbering on in the tent night after night, Dalya said, and me trying to get to sleep. You can always swap with me, he said, she can share with the Aussie prat, who’s in with me. She didn’t reply, but looked at her latte, stirred with the plastic spoon. And what would my brother say? He’d tell the parents when we got home. Baruch knew her brother wouldn’t have minded, he was often drinking and drunk till blinded. Baruch had only suggested it in jest, nothing really meant, but she was preferable to the Aussie in his tent.
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Jul 2, 2013
Jul 2, 2013 at 8:37 AM UTC
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Dalya met Baruch in Oslo, a small cafe in a back street; he was eating a cream cake and coffee. She was fuming over the Yank ***** that she shared a tent with back at base camp. It’s like sharing with a scented skunk, she said. Baruch listened, the fiery girl sat opposite him, stirred her latte, spat out words. Baruch was halfway through the Gulag book, the Solzhenitsyn eye opener on the labour camps of Russia. Dalya’s gripe seemed pretty shallow; her language left little to the imagination, rough words, hard chipped, chiselled out of rock sort of thing, he thought, watching her mouth move the words. Always about the men she’s had, Dalya said, as if I cared a monkey’s. Baruch forked in more cake, fingered off cream from his upper lip and licked. They’d picked up the American in Hamburg, squeezed her into the overland truck with the others. And oh, yes, where she's been, Dalya said, she’s been under the Pope’s armpit, no doubt.  She sipped the latte, stared at Baruch, her eyes dark blue, her lips thin, her hair dark and curled. Maybe she has, Baruch said, but what’s it to you? I have to hear her jabbering on in the tent night after night, Dalya said, and me trying to get to sleep. You can always swap with me, he said, she can share with the Aussie prat, who’s in with me. She didn’t reply, but looked at her latte, stirred with the plastic spoon. And what would my brother say? He’d tell the parents when we got home. Baruch knew her brother wouldn’t have minded, he was often drinking and drunk till blinded. Baruch had only suggested it in jest, nothing really meant, but she was preferable to the Aussie in his tent.
Odd thing, the American and the Aussie guy did share a tent in the end, a meeting of nations.
terry-collett
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Jul 2, 2013
Jul 2, 2013 at 8:37 AM UTC
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