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We came but our children have barely time for us for they are leading busy lives. When we were younger we had barely time for us for we were leading busy lives. How it passes: like the train that brought us, winding but with purposeful direction. How it passes: like steam above tea cups, a gently rising evaporation. We had tea with the widow of our son. Our train returns home early. Life goes on.
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Sep 18, 2020
Sep 18, 2020 at 12:00 PM UTC
Tokyo Story
We came but our children have barely time for us for they are leading busy lives. When we were younger we had barely time for us for we were leading busy lives. How it passes: like the train that brought us, winding but with purposeful direction. How it passes: like steam above tea cups, a gently rising evaporation. We had tea with the widow of our son. Our train returns home early. Life goes on.
Inspired by Japanese director Yasujiro Ozu's 1953 film Tokyo Story. Ozu's simple and gentle style is one of cinema's great treasures, and I hope to one day be able to do it justice in words.
normancrane
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Sep 18, 2020
Sep 18, 2020 at 12:00 PM UTC
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