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Tis was a nice day, where everything happened to fall my way. I did not even have to worry about allergies that come with May. Till change did that day like a fork on a highway. Then I struggled to find my way All the sudden I was trapped in my mind trying not to mind All the landmines, that are negative thoughts, in my mind I tried to unwind but I was quite in a bind. Sometimes I truly felt like I was wondering blind. I feel what I am saying can make many eyes roll But that struggle for me, took a toll To be quite honest I was quite full. Like a marble ball in a funnel, I began to spiral. I thought that I should not have to go through this bull considering the weight I constantly pull Close I felt to being lost, Life then would be all but lost. Anytime I try to build myself up, it came at a steep cost. Right until she showed up. I thought it was too good to be true, like something I made up She told me never give up. She also said to keep my hopes up After a while things truly did go up So if You ever read this thank you I could not be where I am without you So this is my sincere and true thank you.
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Sep 14, 2020
Sep 14, 2020 at 1:49 PM UTC
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Tis was a nice day, where everything happened to fall my way. I did not even have to worry about allergies that come with May. Till change did that day like a fork on a highway. Then I struggled to find my way All the sudden I was trapped in my mind trying not to mind All the landmines, that are negative thoughts, in my mind I tried to unwind but I was quite in a bind. Sometimes I truly felt like I was wondering blind. I feel what I am saying can make many eyes roll But that struggle for me, took a toll To be quite honest I was quite full. Like a marble ball in a funnel, I began to spiral. I thought that I should not have to go through this bull considering the weight I constantly pull Close I felt to being lost, Life then would be all but lost. Anytime I try to build myself up, it came at a steep cost. Right until she showed up. I thought it was too good to be true, like something I made up She told me never give up. She also said to keep my hopes up After a while things truly did go up So if You ever read this thank you I could not be where I am without you So this is my sincere and true thank you.
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Pablo_LunaLC
20/M/Elk Grove, CA
Sep 14, 2020
Sep 14, 2020 at 1:49 PM UTC
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