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"While I gaze upon it I feel a certain distance: The moon light Makes its way to dwellings Everywhere, I feel."       by Ki no Tsurayuki My Reply Bright Issues the Moon dusts the landscape with pale ash illumination slackens our taut customs we're brought closer to our hearts [Bonus Material. Earlier looser version : When brighter the Moon unknots our taught habits spends our ideas freely in its pale light we act closer to our hearts]
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Aug 27, 2020
Aug 27, 2020 at 1:14 AM UTC
Tanka - 'reply' homework II
"While I gaze upon it I feel a certain distance: The moon light Makes its way to dwellings Everywhere, I feel."       by Ki no Tsurayuki My Reply Bright Issues the Moon dusts the landscape with pale ash illumination slackens our taut customs we're brought closer to our hearts [Bonus Material. Earlier looser version : When brighter the Moon unknots our taught habits spends our ideas freely in its pale light we act closer to our hearts]
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Aug 27, 2020
Aug 27, 2020 at 1:14 AM UTC
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