Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
my life has changed forever from normal, my everyday life now does sever july 4th weekend, fireworks were going off inside of me my racing heart had finally brought me to bended knee afib, supraventricular tachycardia... congestive heart failure was my flava' rushed to the icu... sign these here papers the doctor asked me to do we've exhausted all medicines, all of them we've went through i ask, can i call my wife in case i never speak to her again there was no answer, it was the most scared and alone i ever felt then icu doctors huddled and staring at me like i am a mystery they shock me and send thousands of volts of electricity through me the paddles burn and welt my chest and back my room filled with chaos it certainly did not lack bells and alarms made my ears want to cry lying there thinking....it was my time to die. 'Yours and everyone's concrete poet Part Deux' 👷🏻‍♂️
0
Aug 12, 2020
Aug 12, 2020 at 7:29 AM UTC
my first night in icu
my life has changed forever from normal, my everyday life now does sever july 4th weekend, fireworks were going off inside of me my racing heart had finally brought me to bended knee afib, supraventricular tachycardia... congestive heart failure was my flava' rushed to the icu... sign these here papers the doctor asked me to do we've exhausted all medicines, all of them we've went through i ask, can i call my wife in case i never speak to her again there was no answer, it was the most scared and alone i ever felt then icu doctors huddled and staring at me like i am a mystery they shock me and send thousands of volts of electricity through me the paddles burn and welt my chest and back my room filled with chaos it certainly did not lack bells and alarms made my ears want to cry lying there thinking....it was my time to die. 'Yours and everyone's concrete poet Part Deux' 👷🏻‍♂️
the-concrete-poet-1
Written by
Aug 12, 2020
Aug 12, 2020 at 7:29 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem