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My love for you Fades Slightly With each passing day Rewrite: The way in which I love you Changes Greatly With each passing day And I can feel it moving from Bed sheets To "besties" And I'm not sure how I feel about that. Rewrite: I'm completely sure how I feel about that I'm just not sure what it means.
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Jun 18, 2013
Jun 18, 2013 at 2:47 AM UTC
Back to the drawing board
My love for you Fades Slightly With each passing day Rewrite: The way in which I love you Changes Greatly With each passing day And I can feel it moving from Bed sheets To "besties" And I'm not sure how I feel about that. Rewrite: I'm completely sure how I feel about that I'm just not sure what it means.
m-clement
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Jun 18, 2013
Jun 18, 2013 at 2:47 AM UTC
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