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It was raining, thats all I knew, I was heading home to see my baby boo. It was stroming as I walked up the drive, Thats when I saw her and another man begining to look alive. I stopped and began to smoke, It hurt so much I began to choke. They decided to go out for the night, I headed toward them, maybe she would see me and we would reunite. It was a mistake, Him and I began to fight, I was as swift as a snake. When other guy was down, I went to claime my prize, When I faced her there was only fear laying within her deep blue eyes. I ran off in a rage, feeling hurt and sick, She helped the other guy walk as he leaned on a wall made of brick. I ran into an alley and broke down, The rain becoming an overwelming sound. The other guy went to search for me, He rounded a corner and saw me, his face went grim. I faced the other guy, and was suddenly slapped, The snake was now trapped. The other guy beat me senseless, He didnt know that her and I shared a connection, and that he was hitting her aswell.. she was defenceless. I thought of her, All the memories of her and I began to reoccur. The other guy kicked me once more, He then walked away and didn't care anymore. I lay there short of breath, the rain feeling as cold as death, That was when I took my last breath.
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Jun 17, 2013
Jun 17, 2013 at 1:06 PM UTC
That Night In The Rain
It was raining, thats all I knew, I was heading home to see my baby boo. It was stroming as I walked up the drive, Thats when I saw her and another man begining to look alive. I stopped and began to smoke, It hurt so much I began to choke. They decided to go out for the night, I headed toward them, maybe she would see me and we would reunite. It was a mistake, Him and I began to fight, I was as swift as a snake. When other guy was down, I went to claime my prize, When I faced her there was only fear laying within her deep blue eyes. I ran off in a rage, feeling hurt and sick, She helped the other guy walk as he leaned on a wall made of brick. I ran into an alley and broke down, The rain becoming an overwelming sound. The other guy went to search for me, He rounded a corner and saw me, his face went grim. I faced the other guy, and was suddenly slapped, The snake was now trapped. The other guy beat me senseless, He didnt know that her and I shared a connection, and that he was hitting her aswell.. she was defenceless. I thought of her, All the memories of her and I began to reoccur. The other guy kicked me once more, He then walked away and didn't care anymore. I lay there short of breath, the rain feeling as cold as death, That was when I took my last breath.
This poem is about a song. This isnt a personal account
Edward-S
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Canadian
Jun 17, 2013
Jun 17, 2013 at 1:06 PM UTC
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