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Bright fluorescent lights, they are now shining down from above. The line is long, the wait is on, it's taken so long and I am only there for sugar and milk. There is a woman in front of me, and we look at each other. She seems to see it deep inside me, she seems so worried and understanding. Like she, like I, has been there before. The place where eyes don't shine. The darkest places that exist in our minds. She seems to be sad as I ask her where she gets her hair dyed. Then I see the stamps she passes to the clerk. A blue, and a white paper. "Oh, you have kids?" the clerk asks; she replies with a casual and polite "Yes." She is young, barely older than me, and I feel the weight of the room fall down onto all the people in line. I haven't seen her since, I just hope she's doing fine.
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Jul 23, 2020
Jul 23, 2020 at 8:02 PM UTC
A Rare Moment I'm Sure to Forget.
Bright fluorescent lights, they are now shining down from above. The line is long, the wait is on, it's taken so long and I am only there for sugar and milk. There is a woman in front of me, and we look at each other. She seems to see it deep inside me, she seems so worried and understanding. Like she, like I, has been there before. The place where eyes don't shine. The darkest places that exist in our minds. She seems to be sad as I ask her where she gets her hair dyed. Then I see the stamps she passes to the clerk. A blue, and a white paper. "Oh, you have kids?" the clerk asks; she replies with a casual and polite "Yes." She is young, barely older than me, and I feel the weight of the room fall down onto all the people in line. I haven't seen her since, I just hope she's doing fine.
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18/M/Chicago
Jul 23, 2020
Jul 23, 2020 at 8:02 PM UTC
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