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i was unable to sleep last night everything was too loud clocks ticked fans whirred these noises were amplified by the night though the noises were pounding loud obnoxious they weren't loud enough to quieten the thoughts in my head. they spun dancers are beautiful by themselves but together with no obvious rhythm and with so many they crash bump and disturb the dancers surrounding them they spun uncontrollably fast chaos playing their part too only stopping a short time to catch their breath hours later they begin to tire become stif and jerky in their movements a wind begins to blow softly and swiftly moving past the dancers with a sudden serge of power it speeds up whips around the dancers get carried along with it turning and swirling faster and faster their rough grace returns the dancers spin away faster with the wind on their back whirring like little spin tops in and around each other in no time a wind storm has been created powerful and ruthless destroying everything but those dancing thoughts
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Jun 15, 2013
Jun 15, 2013 at 12:13 AM UTC
thoughts that dance
i was unable to sleep last night everything was too loud clocks ticked fans whirred these noises were amplified by the night though the noises were pounding loud obnoxious they weren't loud enough to quieten the thoughts in my head. they spun dancers are beautiful by themselves but together with no obvious rhythm and with so many they crash bump and disturb the dancers surrounding them they spun uncontrollably fast chaos playing their part too only stopping a short time to catch their breath hours later they begin to tire become stif and jerky in their movements a wind begins to blow softly and swiftly moving past the dancers with a sudden serge of power it speeds up whips around the dancers get carried along with it turning and swirling faster and faster their rough grace returns the dancers spin away faster with the wind on their back whirring like little spin tops in and around each other in no time a wind storm has been created powerful and ruthless destroying everything but those dancing thoughts
one of my older poems re-done, i hope you like C:
maybella-snow
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Jun 15, 2013
Jun 15, 2013 at 12:13 AM UTC
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