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i was travelling two days ago by coach i was sat on the left by the window i looked out in transit just gazing at the fields as life was going by and little did i see the usual countryside flashing by each time the hedge was low to see the cows and horses grazing happily but on one occasion i looked out and was looking at the sky just letting my mind go at how peaceful it all was a clear blue sky few clouds high up the sun coming and going hiding behind the odd one but as i looked out i noticed this one cloud so low it was that i felt i could reach out and touch it white n billowy no exact shape to it just a cloud it was but seeing it so low i was amazed just wondering why it was so low how it could be what kind of cloud it was taking me back to georaphy listening to the teacher talking about different types of clouds what they were n how they were called so but still i couldnt remember what it was called but the fact was it just amazed me sitting there was i staring at this cloud as we drove on by just wondering in awe thinking reaching out and touching it so low it was that i could put my arm through the window n grab this cloud n just feel it within my grasp all it was was a simple cloud but why even now do i think about it so was it that peaceful to me to just admire a cloud that was so low i could touch it for it was no more than a few storeys high if had been an office tower there then you would of walked up through it and above it but who would or really noticed it i noticed it i lost myself in it my mind wondering just thinking about a cloud how simple it is that it was just there like all the others but so low it was that i could of touched it well thats how it felt to me but to me that was all i noticed to someone else they may not of seen for who knows as that moment has gone now no cloud will ever be the same for now i have that thought that little clip of time n space deep in my mind i hold that feeling of how a simple cloud made me feel smile happy lost in thought do we really take such a simple thing in life so granted that we dont notice the inner beauty of its existence well now you know my thought how a single cloud has made me feel two days ago on a trip i made
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Jun 12, 2013
Jun 12, 2013 at 7:03 PM UTC
A Cloud
i was travelling two days ago by coach i was sat on the left by the window i looked out in transit just gazing at the fields as life was going by and little did i see the usual countryside flashing by each time the hedge was low to see the cows and horses grazing happily but on one occasion i looked out and was looking at the sky just letting my mind go at how peaceful it all was a clear blue sky few clouds high up the sun coming and going hiding behind the odd one but as i looked out i noticed this one cloud so low it was that i felt i could reach out and touch it white n billowy no exact shape to it just a cloud it was but seeing it so low i was amazed just wondering why it was so low how it could be what kind of cloud it was taking me back to georaphy listening to the teacher talking about different types of clouds what they were n how they were called so but still i couldnt remember what it was called but the fact was it just amazed me sitting there was i staring at this cloud as we drove on by just wondering in awe thinking reaching out and touching it so low it was that i could put my arm through the window n grab this cloud n just feel it within my grasp all it was was a simple cloud but why even now do i think about it so was it that peaceful to me to just admire a cloud that was so low i could touch it for it was no more than a few storeys high if had been an office tower there then you would of walked up through it and above it but who would or really noticed it i noticed it i lost myself in it my mind wondering just thinking about a cloud how simple it is that it was just there like all the others but so low it was that i could of touched it well thats how it felt to me but to me that was all i noticed to someone else they may not of seen for who knows as that moment has gone now no cloud will ever be the same for now i have that thought that little clip of time n space deep in my mind i hold that feeling of how a simple cloud made me feel smile happy lost in thought do we really take such a simple thing in life so granted that we dont notice the inner beauty of its existence well now you know my thought how a single cloud has made me feel two days ago on a trip i made
Saturday, 16 August 2008 at 19:52
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Jun 12, 2013
Jun 12, 2013 at 7:03 PM UTC
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