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oh                                           yum                                    moon                                supper                            served on                         dark platter                       of night sky                    salad tossed in                   starry dressing                  orange segment                   mouthwatering                    sea urchin roe                      salty crescent                                          lemon sliver                           melon slice                                                                   succulent                                   moon                                         yum                                               oh
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Jun 12, 2013
Jun 12, 2013 at 4:36 PM UTC
EDIBLE MOON
oh                                           yum                                    moon                                supper                            served on                         dark platter                       of night sky                    salad tossed in                   starry dressing                  orange segment                   mouthwatering                    sea urchin roe                      salty crescent                                          lemon sliver                           melon slice                                                                   succulent                                   moon                                         yum                                               oh
Hmmm- the first word-the point of the moon- somehow moved itself way to the left side of the page when I copied-I have edited and moved it back to where it should be, but it won't save to there. ****
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Jun 12, 2013
Jun 12, 2013 at 4:36 PM UTC
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