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Today a thousand burdens coalesced; Mind-monsters made meal of me. Grief carved my face. Cry not, cry not, We have no room for more tears. In the morning, I saw dawn rising, And a grey world turn green. The sky was emptiness, blue bold music, Over the sun that swift leapt high. So cry not, cry not, my friend in sorrow, Though masked faces weep in silence. We are not alone in this desperate anger; Dim lies the light before dawn.
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Jun 27, 2020
Jun 27, 2020 at 1:09 PM UTC
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Today a thousand burdens coalesced; Mind-monsters made meal of me. Grief carved my face. Cry not, cry not, We have no room for more tears. In the morning, I saw dawn rising, And a grey world turn green. The sky was emptiness, blue bold music, Over the sun that swift leapt high. So cry not, cry not, my friend in sorrow, Though masked faces weep in silence. We are not alone in this desperate anger; Dim lies the light before dawn.
Experimenting with Norse verse patterns: kennings, alliteration, consonance, etc. Any Beowulf scholars out there?
K_E_Cummins
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Jun 27, 2020
Jun 27, 2020 at 1:09 PM UTC
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