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dear god, you humble me into quietude she says it’s sunny and 75 nearing 3’o’clock, cooling, let’s go for our usual constitutional, for a lovely afternoon walk to Shell Beach *can’t can’t can’t walking now in a bottomless pit, every handhold, poems, newly commissioned, newborn, broken off the wall, revealing a gleaming, light of iron pyrite, really good fool’s gold, cause only fools write good poetry, or even try* but tonight I’m gonna feed you bucatini bolognese babe, you gotta walk, make some room for all the words that will come tumbling free falling while I’m sleeping next, you’re up prowling looking for rhymes, lines, unheard of before, you’ll need energy to bite, write, and make loving poetry and then, then, sleep late, my laddie-baddie, new ones on my nightstand, for my perusal, my usual unusual man who gifts me them to in quantities of ‘more galore,’ that I accept, adore...adore so afterwards, I must say my morning prayer, as an atheist forgiven, the one I commissioned, and you composed, for me: Dear God: you humble me into quietude, with gratitude...
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Jun 19, 2020
Jun 19, 2020 at 3:37 PM UTC
dear god, you humble me into quietude
dear god, you humble me into quietude she says it’s sunny and 75 nearing 3’o’clock, cooling, let’s go for our usual constitutional, for a lovely afternoon walk to Shell Beach *can’t can’t can’t walking now in a bottomless pit, every handhold, poems, newly commissioned, newborn, broken off the wall, revealing a gleaming, light of iron pyrite, really good fool’s gold, cause only fools write good poetry, or even try* but tonight I’m gonna feed you bucatini bolognese babe, you gotta walk, make some room for all the words that will come tumbling free falling while I’m sleeping next, you’re up prowling looking for rhymes, lines, unheard of before, you’ll need energy to bite, write, and make loving poetry and then, then, sleep late, my laddie-baddie, new ones on my nightstand, for my perusal, my usual unusual man who gifts me them to in quantities of ‘more galore,’ that I accept, adore...adore so afterwards, I must say my morning prayer, as an atheist forgiven, the one I commissioned, and you composed, for me: Dear God: you humble me into quietude, with gratitude...
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Jun 19, 2020
Jun 19, 2020 at 3:37 PM UTC
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