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[min 1] Bleed my blackness away Brother for I want to be you one day All just and fair For the Lord knows I failed To make you see my way [min 2] Just today ought to be the day Lord found me, under silent gaze to steal my sunshine away For he sent his carpenter to chisel my life away. [min 3] father's blood, for water spray plough cotton, your way black cotton, to design thy dreams you did silence my sway A breath in the fray, I breathe away [min 4] the fair soldier, does your bid in the darkness of the night he steals my life away as the wheels of time, tick away a breath in the fray, I breathe away [min 4:30] crushed under the wheels of your desires, of your greed wheels of time turn, the world don't care for no time to stand and stare [min 5] no time to hang that noose no tree that stand tall to carry me to your place on the end of a rope hung loose. no time to stare, no time to snooze [min 5:30] no time to stand and stare for there is another to bleed for justice to be done the world is to be rid of the blackness, that's me [min 6] A musical note of your instrument He too is your son, O' Lord my executioneer is here with hatchets drawn to bleed my blackness away [min 6:30] saw him to the end of his rainbow but no legs to walk me,  home O' mama, sorry to keep you waiting don't set the table, the supper bowl with eager eyes, and a losing hope [min 7] Oh' mama, I can't breathe my brother just, with knees pressed deep for he has decided to slay by bleeding my blackness away by bleeding my blackness away [min 7:30] Pray, no more, but alas every day is a glorious day, for one more to bleach his bones, to pure cotton in the air to breathe his last away [min 8] wish my kin led me by his hand as the wheels of world moved, with lightening speed, I breathe my last, I bleed my blackness away [min 8:30] the light of life fades, amongst red neon stares whilst roses wilt by the roadside and hopes to pain,  by the wayside I breathe my last, I bleed my blackness away, [min 8:40] black cotton in the air white cotton, a soul lay bare red cotton in the air red cotton in the flare [min 8:46 - FLOYD DIES- The World looks upwards at the SpaceX Falcon 9 Starlink 8th mission] no time too soon fly me to the moon eye coins for the fare so precious, so rare fly me to the air [min 8:47] no time to spare no time to stand and stare 'tis just cotton in the air...
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Jun 9, 2020
Jun 9, 2020 at 11:21 AM UTC
Black Cotton ... In the Air
[min 1] Bleed my blackness away Brother for I want to be you one day All just and fair For the Lord knows I failed To make you see my way [min 2] Just today ought to be the day Lord found me, under silent gaze to steal my sunshine away For he sent his carpenter to chisel my life away. [min 3] father's blood, for water spray plough cotton, your way black cotton, to design thy dreams you did silence my sway A breath in the fray, I breathe away [min 4] the fair soldier, does your bid in the darkness of the night he steals my life away as the wheels of time, tick away a breath in the fray, I breathe away [min 4:30] crushed under the wheels of your desires, of your greed wheels of time turn, the world don't care for no time to stand and stare [min 5] no time to hang that noose no tree that stand tall to carry me to your place on the end of a rope hung loose. no time to stare, no time to snooze [min 5:30] no time to stand and stare for there is another to bleed for justice to be done the world is to be rid of the blackness, that's me [min 6] A musical note of your instrument He too is your son, O' Lord my executioneer is here with hatchets drawn to bleed my blackness away [min 6:30] saw him to the end of his rainbow but no legs to walk me,  home O' mama, sorry to keep you waiting don't set the table, the supper bowl with eager eyes, and a losing hope [min 7] Oh' mama, I can't breathe my brother just, with knees pressed deep for he has decided to slay by bleeding my blackness away by bleeding my blackness away [min 7:30] Pray, no more, but alas every day is a glorious day, for one more to bleach his bones, to pure cotton in the air to breathe his last away [min 8] wish my kin led me by his hand as the wheels of world moved, with lightening speed, I breathe my last, I bleed my blackness away [min 8:30] the light of life fades, amongst red neon stares whilst roses wilt by the roadside and hopes to pain,  by the wayside I breathe my last, I bleed my blackness away, [min 8:40] black cotton in the air white cotton, a soul lay bare red cotton in the air red cotton in the flare [min 8:46 - FLOYD DIES- The World looks upwards at the SpaceX Falcon 9 Starlink 8th mission] no time too soon fly me to the moon eye coins for the fare so precious, so rare fly me to the air [min 8:47] no time to spare no time to stand and stare 'tis just cotton in the air...
CONTEXT: oh it is the african american gentleman floyd on whose neck the cop kept his knees for 8 mins and 46 secs and killed him BACKDROP: The backdrop is the slavery days of America when African Americans working on cotton plantation (fields) were treated badly just like what their current day masters are doing to them using the same supervisor kinds who is the current day cops. POET CHALLENGES the reader to ask the question: What changed if any? ABSTRACT TO LITERAL MEANINGS: 1. the world wants the black cotton i.e African (American and other nationalities)brothers and sisters to conform to their social system and values. The implicit understanding in this regard is that they don't have a history and culture of their own that retrofits as in an evolved state to the current social norms. This in itself is a sense of ownership of a race of people with no regard to who they are and how they want to live. 2. the white cotton is the soul of the black man 3. the red cotton is the burning of the cotton and shedding blood while waging this battle. 4. the moon is representative of white cotton where black cotton can survive.. You don't see the full moon all the time. The black half is hidden but not disowned. 5. the rocket smoke cloud is the cotton we burn in the form of black people on earth who we deem are not worthy to live here among us. 6. eye coins is the coins they place on a dead man's eyes to cross over to the other side of earth i.e heaven. See link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charon%27s_obol#:~:text=Greek%20and%20Latin%20literary%20sources,the%20world%20of%20the%20dead.
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Jun 9, 2020
Jun 9, 2020 at 11:21 AM UTC
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