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Locked away in a tower in the middle of a forest since the age of twelve Hidden from the public eyes for years Beautiful Rapunzel was imprisoned A binding promise made To compensate for the sin of his father who stole for love Rapunzel's life was completely shut a couple of times in a day she only came to light only to let her golden long hair down through a tiny window that connected her caged like world to the bright world outside upon a call from the enchantress "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, please let your long hair down for me" Rapunzel let down the braids of her hair, and the enchantress climbed up to her Many years have passed nobody knew of Rapunzel's existence The dragging years Too little sunlight The magnificent hair of Rapunzel became weak and thin Once it was the strongest ladder but The enchantress fell in the thorny garden in an attempt to climb up the tower Rapunzel's hair no longer lustrous and strong Waiting for a brave prince for too long Till the hair is tired and the waits prolonged....
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Jun 6, 2013
Jun 6, 2013 at 1:43 PM UTC
Poor Rapunzel...
Locked away in a tower in the middle of a forest since the age of twelve Hidden from the public eyes for years Beautiful Rapunzel was imprisoned A binding promise made To compensate for the sin of his father who stole for love Rapunzel's life was completely shut a couple of times in a day she only came to light only to let her golden long hair down through a tiny window that connected her caged like world to the bright world outside upon a call from the enchantress "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, please let your long hair down for me" Rapunzel let down the braids of her hair, and the enchantress climbed up to her Many years have passed nobody knew of Rapunzel's existence The dragging years Too little sunlight The magnificent hair of Rapunzel became weak and thin Once it was the strongest ladder but The enchantress fell in the thorny garden in an attempt to climb up the tower Rapunzel's hair no longer lustrous and strong Waiting for a brave prince for too long Till the hair is tired and the waits prolonged....
sharina-saad
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Malaysian
Jun 6, 2013
Jun 6, 2013 at 1:43 PM UTC
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