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The sun makes me feel like a failure. I do not know why. I have no stories about it, Or metaphors to give you. I do not like to be warm. I do not like things dry. I do not like things bright. I like the rain because it actually touches you It doesn't just tempt you like the sun. If the sun touched you, You would die. The sun is homicidal. It just doesn't commit the murders. I have yet to decide if that is out of laziness, Or compassion. Maybe it is both. I'll go with both.
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Jun 5, 2013
Jun 5, 2013 at 2:21 PM UTC
Grotesque.
The sun makes me feel like a failure. I do not know why. I have no stories about it, Or metaphors to give you. I do not like to be warm. I do not like things dry. I do not like things bright. I like the rain because it actually touches you It doesn't just tempt you like the sun. If the sun touched you, You would die. The sun is homicidal. It just doesn't commit the murders. I have yet to decide if that is out of laziness, Or compassion. Maybe it is both. I'll go with both.
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Jun 5, 2013
Jun 5, 2013 at 2:21 PM UTC
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