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A young man asked me, as if to task me From where I derived my calm attitude. I smiled so gently and shared contently “From awareness, kindness and gratitude.” He seemed perplexed and a little bit vexed And asked if this was just platitude. I smiled again and told my young friend “Just awareness, kindness and gratitude.” I extended my hand, to this puzzled young man Knowing youth often grows through great latitude. Then he gently smiled and his gaze turned mild With awareness, kindness and gratitude.
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May 9, 2020
May 9, 2020 at 9:51 AM UTC
Awareness, Kindness and Gratitude
A young man asked me, as if to task me From where I derived my calm attitude. I smiled so gently and shared contently “From awareness, kindness and gratitude.” He seemed perplexed and a little bit vexed And asked if this was just platitude. I smiled again and told my young friend “Just awareness, kindness and gratitude.” I extended my hand, to this puzzled young man Knowing youth often grows through great latitude. Then he gently smiled and his gaze turned mild With awareness, kindness and gratitude.
This poem was based upon an actual conversation I had with a young business trainee in 2016.
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67/M/New York City
May 9, 2020
May 9, 2020 at 9:51 AM UTC
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