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So there’s this English Patient cave set up Cold, quiet and dying Alone and a sense of properly sad sadness A deep and thorough sadness not just dropped my ice-cream sadness But dying alone and cold sadness Could bring you to tears thinking about it I expect That kind of sadness So the candle is flickering out And no-one is coming for you You realised that hours ago but never stopped hoping And the end of your life is there – shadowing against the cave wall Flickering in and out of view Ethereal and unreal And you laugh a little at the ridiculousness Of your plight And you trace your own fingers around your face Your thirst is irrelevant And you start thinking about what you have been Where you have loved And who Pictures begin to come to mind of beauty and ecstasy And then you fall into satisfied eternity
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 6:23 AM UTC
English Patient Cave...
So there’s this English Patient cave set up Cold, quiet and dying Alone and a sense of properly sad sadness A deep and thorough sadness not just dropped my ice-cream sadness But dying alone and cold sadness Could bring you to tears thinking about it I expect That kind of sadness So the candle is flickering out And no-one is coming for you You realised that hours ago but never stopped hoping And the end of your life is there – shadowing against the cave wall Flickering in and out of view Ethereal and unreal And you laugh a little at the ridiculousness Of your plight And you trace your own fingers around your face Your thirst is irrelevant And you start thinking about what you have been Where you have loved And who Pictures begin to come to mind of beauty and ecstasy And then you fall into satisfied eternity
paul-goring
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May 30, 2013
May 30, 2013 at 6:23 AM UTC
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