Broken, hollowed out
I lie in a spiral of
My mind. Dead to all.

sxpphicxx

Another spiral

an entice of the darkness and its strange embrace, felt snd related. 

x

Ah, that is well said... and not a great place to be!

correct amount of syllables.  I love what you did with them 
hugs
Patty

I don't know. But it is a very nice powerful little poem.

this is a small masterpiece!  Compelling and penetrating!