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No mean to offend, young laddie, a point, if I may It’s ‘Quirrels, not Squirrels ..a difference of ways Not all big bushy tails have ‘Quirrels attached Maybe pedantic, this dance with semantics perhaps, but more than a letter amiss or our ginger tinge to explain with this, the Them and Us, they, while swing from tiny twig, we’ll seek the tallest tree, fly, fall, all, as always, without a fuss, them, no fearsome frights, no sense fun or adventure, they’ve little rewards no risks, no treasures So cute, so cuddly? so canny, so needy, with greedy grabby razor Teeth.... Hard lives to fulfil, you’d think! flitting from bark to branch, boring and every day, dressed in grey while us, ducks and dodges tankers and trucks between the wheels, but chance is our dash; life in the moment or squished in a flash ...That’s how it rolls, fast and loose, the Lowlands, life without stale imitations. Red or dead. And never enough mush, only enough for another furry, fat Squirrel
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Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 2:38 AM UTC
‘Quirrel in a kilt
No mean to offend, young laddie, a point, if I may It’s ‘Quirrels, not Squirrels ..a difference of ways Not all big bushy tails have ‘Quirrels attached Maybe pedantic, this dance with semantics perhaps, but more than a letter amiss or our ginger tinge to explain with this, the Them and Us, they, while swing from tiny twig, we’ll seek the tallest tree, fly, fall, all, as always, without a fuss, them, no fearsome frights, no sense fun or adventure, they’ve little rewards no risks, no treasures So cute, so cuddly? so canny, so needy, with greedy grabby razor Teeth.... Hard lives to fulfil, you’d think! flitting from bark to branch, boring and every day, dressed in grey while us, ducks and dodges tankers and trucks between the wheels, but chance is our dash; life in the moment or squished in a flash ...That’s how it rolls, fast and loose, the Lowlands, life without stale imitations. Red or dead. And never enough mush, only enough for another furry, fat Squirrel
This poem plays with two truisms; the Scots aren’t overly keen on the English and the Red Squirrel population (the ‘Quirrels in the poem ) has been all but wiped out in England by the grey squirrel. Most of the remaining Reds are now found in Scotland, presumably not there for the weather! The poem is a conversation between a ‘Quirrel and some poor badger he’s cornered, probably in some Glasgow pub towards the end of the night when he’s a bit worse for wear. The idea was to keep the rhythms random mimicking the way a squirrel / ‘quirrel runs, stop, start, quick, slow, but never smooth and never straight.
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57/M/Cardiff
Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 2:38 AM UTC
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