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Where were you the day she came? the rain, to wash away our fear and folly you told us to believe, so we saw what you saw, nothing no farmer lost amongst the dust no open mouths without a sound no fog of grey decay, lingering Our eyes were blinded by the prize cheap, plastic toys long discarded an ease to travel, fast to destinations now lost lives enriched by cheaper costs time saved, drank more, worked more, ate more talked less The answers lay, cupped in our hands, but as always, we knew best they pleaded, begged for us to stop, we replied with higher walls taller towers, until the screams became shadows impotent as we hacked and chopped men possessed on poisoned lands until all, took its toll The wheat grew thin the cattle fell, the tides withdrew, revealed our barren shores under, as always the unforgiving star The city streets, empty now those long gone, mere footprints save a lucky few worn and tested waiting, hoping for this day the day she breathes again as parched like Lazarus, refreshed the earth, with its tiny shoots believes finally, a new day will dawn
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Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 2:26 AM UTC
The Rebellion
Where were you the day she came? the rain, to wash away our fear and folly you told us to believe, so we saw what you saw, nothing no farmer lost amongst the dust no open mouths without a sound no fog of grey decay, lingering Our eyes were blinded by the prize cheap, plastic toys long discarded an ease to travel, fast to destinations now lost lives enriched by cheaper costs time saved, drank more, worked more, ate more talked less The answers lay, cupped in our hands, but as always, we knew best they pleaded, begged for us to stop, we replied with higher walls taller towers, until the screams became shadows impotent as we hacked and chopped men possessed on poisoned lands until all, took its toll The wheat grew thin the cattle fell, the tides withdrew, revealed our barren shores under, as always the unforgiving star The city streets, empty now those long gone, mere footprints save a lucky few worn and tested waiting, hoping for this day the day she breathes again as parched like Lazarus, refreshed the earth, with its tiny shoots believes finally, a new day will dawn
I've always loved the rain, but prefer to be inside watching it lash down the window than out in the middle of the park, still a good fifteen minutes away from the front door. But there is a point when you get so wet that you actually give up caring about trying to be dry and just embrace the fact that the weather has won this particular battle! Which is how this poem started out; drenched to the skin and actually in complete awe of the power of Nature, which made me think of climate change which was really starting to make the news at the time, with the Extinction Rebellion protests.
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57/M/Cardiff
Apr 24, 2020
Apr 24, 2020 at 2:26 AM UTC
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