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The crushing sadness Is trickling down my veins And I am beyond saving Even by my own brain Which tries to make me happy By recalling our best moments. It makes me so much sadder. And I try to move sleekly As before But the pain is fighting back Making everything so trivially tedious and difficult and sad I am looking, teary eyed At an origami Triceratops
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May 27, 2013
May 27, 2013 at 10:31 PM UTC
Eight Hours Later
The crushing sadness Is trickling down my veins And I am beyond saving Even by my own brain Which tries to make me happy By recalling our best moments. It makes me so much sadder. And I try to move sleekly As before But the pain is fighting back Making everything so trivially tedious and difficult and sad I am looking, teary eyed At an origami Triceratops
Three variations of sad in one poem. I am on a roll.
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May 27, 2013
May 27, 2013 at 10:31 PM UTC
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