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Conquer now, little by little, work hard and harder, just don't become frail, hard work devoid of true rest, will surely derail your journey, you aren't the first or the last, to go through hardships, remember the history, many before you have come and gone, so what makes you think, that you are the special? It doesn't matter, do your very best, so you'll be able to end, without regret in your heart, that you didn't try, or were afraid to act, we are all meant to die, and that's a proven thing, no, you might not get rich, or have stadiums packed, but your hearth will be right, you were brave in the battle.
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Apr 15, 2020
Apr 15, 2020 at 6:39 AM UTC
Be Strong - Ruined poem (fix the rhymes)
Conquer now, little by little, work hard and harder, just don't become frail, hard work devoid of true rest, will surely derail your journey, you aren't the first or the last, to go through hardships, remember the history, many before you have come and gone, so what makes you think, that you are the special? It doesn't matter, do your very best, so you'll be able to end, without regret in your heart, that you didn't try, or were afraid to act, we are all meant to die, and that's a proven thing, no, you might not get rich, or have stadiums packed, but your hearth will be right, you were brave in the battle.
So this is an exercise in poetry: I have intentionally ruined this poem of mine by replacing the key rhyming words with non rhyming synonyms. Try to find the replaced words in order to make the poem rhyme again. Have fun : ))
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Apr 15, 2020
Apr 15, 2020 at 6:39 AM UTC
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